toxic_tone
318 posts
Sep 05, 2013
4:11 PM
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Last Edited by toxic_tone on Sep 05, 2013 11:36 PM
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toxic_tone
319 posts
Sep 05, 2013
7:54 PM
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Hello? Lol. Jk
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toxic_tone
320 posts
Sep 05, 2013
7:54 PM
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Hello? Lol. Jk
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JInx
521 posts
Sep 05, 2013
8:18 PM
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Lose the disclaimer, it doesn't serve your intension. If you messed up, redo it or post it as is, but don't call attention to it your shortcomings.
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nacoran
7109 posts
Sep 05, 2013
8:20 PM
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I'll try to give it a better listen tomorrow. Trying to critique something while getting dinner and doing laundry doesn't lead to a good close listening. :)
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toxic_tone
321 posts
Sep 05, 2013
11:37 PM
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thx jinx and thx nacoran
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Frank
2702 posts
Sep 06, 2013
3:48 AM
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Take it out on the road brother - If the blues is supposed to make you feel good they did the trick here - your performance made me a happy camper...
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nacoran
7110 posts
Sep 06, 2013
9:42 AM
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What is that at 25 seconds? Oh, there it is again later- kids in the house or was that a cat? :)
I really like that run starting at about 1:49, how you go from vibrato to a bend right about 2:00. 3:45 works particularly well too.
The whole thing sounds good. I think the harp is better than the vocal, but the vocal is pretty good. It doesn't pop in the mix like the harp does though. (How to fix that, I have no idea... that's what I'm working on right now myself.)
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tookatooka
3472 posts
Sep 06, 2013
1:55 PM
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Sounding good to me Toxic. I can't give a crit as I'm just learning the art.
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Seven.Oh.Three.
231 posts
Sep 06, 2013
2:46 PM
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I really enjoyed both you're playing and singing! Get to a blues jam ASAP!!!
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the_happy_honker
164 posts
Sep 06, 2013
3:06 PM
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Markedly improved over your earlier posts. You've clearly gone from playing notes to making music.
You're singing from your head and throat, making you sound a bit thin. You need to get more resonance. Sometimes it helps to just imagine your voice erupting from the very bottom of your lungs. When you feel the resonances creeping up into your pharynx and nasal passages, imagine pushing them down into your chest the size of Carlsbad Caverns.
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Barley Nectar
13 posts
Sep 06, 2013
4:05 PM
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Nice job brother. Love it...BN
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Robdog
13 posts
Sep 06, 2013
4:06 PM
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Kept my attention well enough with good intonation throughout! My subjective comment would be to slow down the hand wah effect where used.
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toxic_tone
322 posts
Sep 06, 2013
10:03 PM
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thanks everyone and thanks happy honker great stuff / i will work on my singing and look up the resonance thing.
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