this was played on a player grand piano. which i got kicked off of 3 times!! i snoke downstairs around 12am and recorded this also take in mind that the acustics in this play was AMAZYING!!!!!
i wrote it in 3days and recorded on the 4th. 2 things inspired me 1 was the baby and the 2nd was the beautiful piano downstairs. god i love it . i wil add harmonica to this song soon and post it again. any advice on the song on an experts point of view??
Yeah, I just wrote it listening to your piece, but kind of loosely. It did sound nice, within the limits of my vocal ability. I probably know a half-dozen singers I see on a weekly basis who could sing it better than me though. :) If you line it up so the rhythm change falls on the 'I haven't seen my baby' stanza it fits pretty well. I'm pretty sure someone else could do a better job of it. Feel free to give it a shot if you'd like. :)
I also was thinking about revising one line...
Oh I put my baby in a harp rack. I taught my baby to play guitar. Oh, and she don't need her daddy (And she just stomps on her daddy's heart.) Now that she's a big blues star.
And switch the verse I added at the end in order with last verse.
Toxic, I hearby grant you all permissions to use the lyric. My band may record it to a different melody but you can use it however you want. Just post them so I can hear. I'm glad you like it. :)
rubes thanks man!! lol what can i say hahaha. i really need a good hard critizism on this piece tho so i can make it better and perfect it. like maybe what other chord can i go into. because i only used 3 chord changes and i almost feel like there is sumthing missing ... idk anyway thanks everyone she is beautiful. we are at home now so i have my time to practice now. she loves music!! lol
