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Heart2Harp
227 posts
Apr 18, 2011
5:50 AM
Hi all,

a friend and I have registered as a duo to compete in a local blues competition. The winners of this competition will get to go on to Memphis to compete in the International Blues Challenge 2011.

So far, the only thing missing is original songs (it would be good to have one or two as part of the setlist).

So I'm reaching out to you guys, wondering if any of you have ever written some lyrics, ideas, complete songs. And if so, would you mind me using them. Your name would be included in the information section about the song and you would be made an honorary member of our duo (I know, what an honor, right?).

What do you guys think?

Mathieu

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Last Edited by on Apr 18, 2011 6:53 AM
Heart2Harp
228 posts
Apr 18, 2011
5:53 AM
here's a little video we made. I din't even know we were filming so it's not a stellar performance from eiher of us. But with a bit of practice, we've got a shot to make it to Memphis.


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nacoran
4014 posts
Apr 18, 2011
12:43 PM
Any particular topic? I've got tons of spare lyrics lying around or I could write something new. (Actually, I'm supposed to be writing something right now for Songwriters' Circle!) And are you looking for something exclusive to you, or can my band still play it? (I can work with you either way, it just limits what songs are available.)

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Heart2Harp
229 posts
Apr 18, 2011
2:02 PM
hey Nacoran,

any topic will do. I just don't have the time to start writing. Plus, I hate what I write.

Your band could still play it. I'd just be using it for the competition. I would say it is an original tune composed by a honorary member of our band (i.e. you).

you can contact me at matgag@videotron.ca if you want to talk some more about it.
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tf10music
78 posts
Apr 19, 2011
12:42 AM
feel free to use this song:

http://www.macjams.com/song/62921

I was recovering from jaw surgery at the time, so the harp sounds like a cow dying. If you can figure out the guitar on it, feel free to use that too.

Cheers
nacoran
4018 posts
Apr 19, 2011
9:08 AM
I posted some lyrics to you on Facebook. I have recordings around here somewhere if the lyrics interest you.

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mercedesrules
96 posts
Apr 19, 2011
10:39 AM
"My Orange Tie"

If you ain't satisfied with my paycheck,
" " " " " "
you might find my orange tie wrapped aroung your neck.

If you spend all my money on a new fur coat
" " " " " " " " " "
Well you might find my orange tie wrapped around your throat.

Last night in a dream a (crazy) vision came to me
I thought I saw my orange tie, swingin' from a tree
And what do you know, people, it WAS STILL ATTACHED TO ME!

( All one tonic chord and out) Have you ever dreamt of killing yourself over somebody?
Have you ever dreamt of killin' yourself over some girl?
Someone that you cared for?
Someone you loved?
Well, I never thought I ever dream of killin' myself over youooo.....

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Swezey8
76 posts
Apr 19, 2011
3:31 PM
Hey H2H! Love your playing and singing man-solid stuff. I've got quite a few songs I can send your way if you want. Standard 12 bars only or anything will work? Ill paste one song below for an idea, I can give you chords/structure if you want too. Email is swezey_mt@yahoo.com if you want to shoot me an email. If you're not interested no biggie- good luck with the competition!

Verse 1:
I don’t know how I feel anymore
What this life means and what is it for?
I’ve got to find where I left off
Won’t you help me find, find myself

PreChorus:
And I don’t care
About your problems
Spent too long
On your problems

Chorus:
What about me,
Oh, what about me

Verse 2:
If I spend my life taking care of you
Then whos gonna take, take care of me?
I don’t know, Lord I just don’t know
Let’s see how it goes out on your own

PreChorus

Chorus

Bridge:
Oh yeaaaaahhhh
Now all the time you got me picking up pieces of your broken life
Every time you come walking by I lose a piece of mine
So tell me how I’m supposed to make everything alright

Chorus (2x)
Rubes
281 posts
Apr 20, 2011
3:54 AM
Sorry mate but my creative juices are dibbed by my bandmates! Good luck Mathieu!, hope you guys win!!
Heart2Harp
230 posts
Apr 20, 2011
7:08 AM
Thanks everyone. Keep'em coming if you got'em and, of course, you want to share'em.
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BronzeWailer
118 posts
Apr 20, 2011
11:23 PM
Hi Mathieu. Here's one I wrote a couple of years ago in the depths of the financial meltdown.

Lordy, lordy. I’ve got the shark bite blues.
“ “
They took an arm and a leg. Not much left for me to lose.
My financial adviser said making money is a cinch.
“ “
Invest it with those wise guys working down at Merrill Lynch.
Well the fund got into trouble. Seems some people told some lies.
The fund got into trouble. Seems some people told some lies.
You see there was a bubble. Everybody was surprised.
I got the shark bite blues. It cost an arm and a leg.
“ “
My pension fund’s busted. I’ve got to go now and beg.

Edited for spelling

Last Edited by on Apr 20, 2011 11:24 PM
phogi
523 posts
Apr 21, 2011
1:21 PM
Heart2Harp,

I would encourage you to keep writing. It took me a year of writing before I liked my lyrics. Then you can write about the things you feel. And then it's all yours.


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