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toxic_tone
27 posts
Mar 11, 2011
8:46 AM
this is not an original beat. Im on vocal and my recording buddy is the rapper i hope you injoy. let me know good or bad comments are welcome.

Last Edited by on Mar 11, 2011 8:52 AM
toxic_tone
28 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:05 AM
i really dont like my vocals i think it just doesnt have that thing. idk
toddlgreene
2693 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:11 AM
Hey, I really liked that. This is from a non-rap fan, too. Keep it up! Good harp work with hooks. Very nice stuff.

What did you record it on?

Oh, and the vocals DO work. You're your own worst critic. Extra points for not using AutoTune!
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Last Edited by on Mar 11, 2011 9:13 AM
toxic_tone
29 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:26 AM
lol thanks man!!
Todd Parrott
397 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:31 AM
I really like you harp playing on this one but I would stay away from the high end stuff on this one, like the 7 draw. The major third just doesn't fit over a minor 7 chord - you could always use a retuned harp with a flatted 7 draw. You seem to have a good "feel" for your music and I like your harp licks. Vocals aren't bad either.

EDIT: Nice job controlling your half step bend on 3 draw, and nice overall tone too.

Hmm... after a 2nd listen, I guess you really didn't hit the 7 draw after all.

Last Edited by on Mar 11, 2011 9:37 AM
toxic_tone
30 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:36 AM
thanks!
chromaticblues
686 posts
Mar 11, 2011
9:54 AM
Much Much better!
When you get a hook lick stay with it giving it slight variations. You got away from it a couple times and you started playing a second hook line a couple times. I think if you stay with the original thought and always work of that the whole thing will be more cohesive! You worked your way up to the top and kind of got lost! No problem. When that happens just go down to around hole 4 and slide up while drawing in to 9 draw and play 9D 8B 8D 7B 7D 6B 5D 4D 4B 3D 3D* 2D. Thats a bail out I used that works pretty good and people will think you meant to do it!
All in all much better. Nice tone as Todd said. Now you have to do some nasty attacking harp to JUST a rapper and you! Thats where you'll have to settle in to being the rythem section and solo when he takes a break! Word!
toxic_tone
31 posts
Mar 11, 2011
10:21 AM
true true ill try that. i got your cd which song has that thing you were talking about?
toxic_tone
32 posts
Mar 11, 2011
10:25 AM
that last part sounds a bit hard with the rythem any examples?
chromaticblues
687 posts
Mar 11, 2011
11:48 AM
Toxic the last song on the CD "Stand" Its a G harp in second nothing fancy other than the way I attack the notes. Its a percussive funk type thing. I think that feel would work well with some Hip Hop.
You know there is a Satan and Adam song that has a good hook lick that would work well in that setting. Hell there is probably more than one. I'll get back to ya on that one. I listen to them this weekend and let you know.
toxic_tone
33 posts
Mar 11, 2011
12:31 PM
ok got ya i thought that it was the last song too. i c what u mean. i llike the way u "attack" the harp in the process of trying to figure out what you had ment, i found a few other sounds that would sound like a percussion ill post em when i get a chance
toxic_tone
34 posts
Mar 11, 2011
8:21 PM
:)
Ant138
825 posts
Mar 12, 2011
3:06 AM
Very cool. I liked all of it :o)
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toxic_tone
35 posts
Mar 12, 2011
5:22 AM
thank you ant128 and rubes. hey where is Oz or what is that?
Rubes
244 posts
Mar 12, 2011
6:02 AM
Hey toxic, I could spin you a yarn and say it's just up the yellow brick road, but it's actually quite a sizeable island/continent in the southern hemisphere where we walk and talk a 'bit' like you guys!!! (you know, where men are blokes and women are sheilas!)
toxic_tone
37 posts
Mar 12, 2011
9:58 AM
oooooooo hahahahhah i c wish i can visit i hear its really nice out there.
jodanchudan
292 posts
Mar 13, 2011
3:39 AM
Cool playing! I thought it worked really well.
Stevelegh
86 posts
Mar 13, 2011
5:27 AM
Toxic,

You're becoming a bit of an influence on me. I love this stuff. Really nice use of Jaheim.

I'm not a major rap fan, but this has a real old skool vibe 70's / 80's.

Reminds me a little of a Bootsy collins track I heard.

Very nice.
toxic_tone
38 posts
Mar 13, 2011
6:34 AM
i like the part at 1:50. thanks stevelegh. thats exactly what im trying to do is like a 80's 90's feel to it. all my music will be from these era's im working on another should be out in a few days.
toxic_tone
41 posts
Mar 14, 2011
4:44 AM
:)
isaacullah
1445 posts
Mar 14, 2011
10:38 AM
Another good one. YEah, late 80's early 90's vibe for sure. The MC was MUCH better on this one, and his rap fit well in the context of the song and your harp playing. I'm gonna stick with my same comment about what happens when you go up high, but you are clearly working on that... REALLY great hook. very catchy and fits well with this type of music. All in all, this is excellent work, and I'm really looking forward to your next tracks!
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toxic_tone
45 posts
Mar 14, 2011
11:56 AM
hell yeahhhh! :D i am very weak on my high notes but yes working on em alot.
Lmbrjak
16 posts
Mar 14, 2011
5:35 PM
I think you did a fine job playing those high notes,I just don't think those notes right after 1:56 fit in as well. I loved 1:18-1:36 and 1:50-1:56. The whole thing was very good music. Singing was very good also.
toxic_tone
48 posts
Mar 14, 2011
6:58 PM
thanks man u rock! i c what u mean
toxic_tone
49 posts
Mar 15, 2011
10:38 AM
:)
toxic_tone
51 posts
Mar 16, 2011
4:21 AM
:)
toxic_tone
54 posts
Mar 25, 2011
8:56 AM
just wanted to give this video some more views share if yall can thanks
toxic_tone
59 posts
Mar 26, 2011
6:34 PM
more view more views lol
phogi
517 posts
Mar 26, 2011
7:45 PM
Hey toxic, I'm diggin. I'd echo Todd's sentiment. Something to try - over dub your vocals - sing it twice, matching your rhythms and diction EXACTLY instead of saturating your voice with chourus fx. It produces a similar but more familiar sound. Give it a shot.
toxic_tone
60 posts
Mar 26, 2011
8:14 PM
ok thanks for that phogi
toxic_tone
61 posts
Mar 30, 2011
8:27 AM
:)


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