You start off wonderfully and it breaks down a little bit from :30 - :48 . I can see you stop visibly tapping you foot as strongly. I also got a sense that you sped up slightly during those 18 seconds. Then you get right back in the groove again strong.
Work on getting some vibrato on your blow bends as well to give it some character! :)
Truth be told, I don't know if I could play though the song by myself without stopping. So cheers for you going from start to finish with it.
