Cool stuff! Sounds intense, like you're locked into the groove. Did you work out a harp part or improvise it? It sounds more structured to me and changes well with the song. Like the 5 draw emphasis around 2:00 and that descending lick at 2:20.
thanks jodanchudan well i did a harp part that was to much like noodle soup,so I erased it and got out the disscussion of chorus forms i recorded from David Barretts school for a review,then i thought i might try a modified version of the 1st chorus riff from the lesson (walk with me) its not the same but its inspird from it,then i have the turnaround i do alot of that one ive kind of noodled it for awhile ,but Im new to this firguring out struture with chrous forms.But Im glad you notice cause i was trying to struture it some;-)
