I was working on an original song with a writer who had exact specifications. Neither one of us read music although we each have passing knowledge of it. We found common ground with this:
The 16th note is irrelevent. It was drawn as a symbol of frustration and vague memories of classes that we each wished we hadn't slept through.
Interesting, it sorta looks like you went back in time. Back to the earlier days of notation. ---------- Sun, sun, sun Burn, burn, burn Soon, soon, soon Moon, moon, moon