Nice, smooth playing and I.like the tremelo at the end. If anything, I'd say use more repetition at the start so there's a definitehead - anf return to it at the end (or use fragments of it during thr the solo if you don't want to come back to it later).
Thanks I must admit to being a bit too relaxed with this one. I found it came easier but not strongly enough. I take on-board your suggestions though. Many thanks.
I see good improvement over a year. Your bends are much better as is your timing. You used to try to fit too many notes where they didn't fit in the groove. Now you seem to be playing in the groove better-less is more. Great job Tooka. Keep it up!
Hey Tooka. I think it's going great. All the bends sound in tune, definitely feeling bluesy.
I think you could do some work on articulating the notes. It feels a little laid back (which does;t feel right for this track), for me I think you could attack the notes a bit harder and play with a little more confidence.
Thanks Tuckster, good of you to comment. Much appreciated.
Thanks Baker. That means a lot. Feeling bluesy has not been easy. I need to be very careful as I'm likely to branch out into a happy, clappy melodyfest. The articulation, I agree. This time I was too relaxed. The two tries before this, I was tense and it didn't work out. Got to catch the middle ground. Thanks again. Much appreciated.
