toddlgreene
3158 posts
Jul 22, 2011
12:29 PM
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Cool, man! All in all, some good harping, although it's mostly a solo throughout the song. Nothing wrong with that, but from a listener's perspective if you established some defined rhythm parts, and alternated between them and soloing, it would add some good structure. And, although I know you were just jamming, so I don't wanna sound hypercritical, but around the 2:10 mark, you went to the 9 & 10 holes and did some blow bends...I'd work on a smoother transisition back down below the 6 hole from here. You've got the chops, man. Now, if you and your wife can just figure out why y'all keep having all those kids, you might have more time to play. ;-)
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Todd L. Greene
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