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WestVirginiaTom
64 posts
Oct 14, 2012
3:59 PM
Review and comment if you please...

Steamrollin Stan
596 posts
Oct 15, 2012
4:08 AM
Your better off trying to play to a backing track at harmonica boogie.com, this is good but you'll get a better response in my opinion.
tookatooka
3102 posts
Oct 15, 2012
4:44 AM
@WVT sounded just fine to me, You kept it going nicely and each verse was different. I'd be pleased with a performance like that but, I think the guys on here may say it sounded a bit clinical and needed to be dirtied up a bit with some chords, octaves and some slurring but all in all, I thought it was fine.
didjcripey
397 posts
Oct 15, 2012
5:00 AM
Given how hard an instrument the harp is to play well, a nice solid achievement.

My five cents worth, if you want to take it to the next level, learn to tongue block. Tooka was right; chords, octaves and don't forget tongue slaps. Rick Estrin has some good instructional material which talks about playing before or after the beat, too.
Some work on articulation wouldn't go astray either.
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bluzharper
1 post
Oct 15, 2012
7:53 AM
Yes, on the right path, octave, more triplets.
KingoBad
1178 posts
Oct 15, 2012
8:04 AM
You need to work on your blues intonation. You are moving the song just fine, but it is too straight. You need to add "blue" notes. It all sounds very major and sing song when you play so straight...

Dig in, make it cry, don't just play the notes...


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Danny
WestVirginiaTom
65 posts
Oct 15, 2012
9:37 AM
Thanks for the tips and comments! I know I have a long way to go. Much to work on. I love the free advice on this forum!

For those who want to prolong the torture, here is a slower version of the same song (minus the intro and one verse)...

ridge
376 posts
Oct 15, 2012
9:48 AM
I'm always a fan of accuracy and control over the harmonica; this is the foundation for everything else you will ever play. You have this.

I'm also a fan of using ones ears to figure a song out. It sounds like you learned this from a tab and are just reciting it. I mean no offense by this. If I am right, it may be food for thought to break away from this method of learning.

Having spent a large portion of my time developing and playing very accurately and cleanly, the best change I made was to dirty my playing up.

Let air bleed in to an adjacent hole. Use some kind of vibrato whether it be throat, tongue, diaphragm. Work on you attack or articulation as didjcripey mentions. This would involve tonguing notes to break it up a bit more.

Again, you have, what I consider to be, some of the best fundamentals. These will aid you considerably, but can hurt you too. Don't be afraid to challenge yourself. You played well, but there is a lot more than just playing it well or "correctly".

All the best,

Dan Ridgeway
isaacullah
2157 posts
Oct 15, 2012
10:57 AM
First off, great job! I will, however, second the advice given by KingoBad and ridge. You've got the notes down, and they are in time and go with the track, and all, but it all sounds to "Souza Band", straight-time, clean. It needs to swing a bit more, an to get dirty from time time to time. You especially need to try to make your "response" portions of the "call and response" dirtier and more different from the "call". There needs to be variation in that coupling...

Of course, these are things that I too struggle with, so I feel your pain for sure! :) I'm glad you put this out there, as that's the only way to keep getting better! You are well on your way!

Cheers,

~Isaac
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Frank
1293 posts
Oct 16, 2012
6:01 AM

Nice practice session Tom...Continue to keep mindfully and meditatively exploring the pure profound beauty of those longer held notes in that tune - see if you can even play them with more relaxation,roundness,depth and feeling...That is a great way to strengthen the muscles in your brain, face,mouth,throat etc...Which will set you up for success when you want to embellish the song with other techniques.

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